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Chapter 4
Jacks pov
Jack was completely confused. This beautiful girl was crying and hugging him for a reason definitely unknown to him. All he knew was that her name was (f/n). He just sat there letting you hold him and cry on him till you calmed down. You sighed before pulling back. Jack felt extremely cold for some reason and frowned as you pulled away.
“I’m sorry that was probably extremely awkward for you.” She laughed lightly. Jack smiled and shook his head.
“I’m Jack Skellington by the way. The Pumpkin King.” He said softly. You looked up at him wide eyed.
“So? What are you exactly? I mean not to be rude but I know you’re a skeleton, but how?” You asked slightly confused. Jack looked you up and down.
“Are you by any chance human?” He asked. You weren’t sure how to answer that. Of course you were! But what does that mean here? Would he kill you? Send you back? Jack seemed to get the answer he was looking for with your silence. Jack jumped up and moved from side to side as your eyes followed him. “How did you get here?” He quickly asked.
“Um there was this door with a pumpkin on it and a jumped in.” Jack stopped and walked up to you closer.
“You saw the doors?”
“And you can see me now?”
“Yes.” There was a long pause of silence till jack broke it in a fit of …. Curiosity? He paced again and again mumbling and looking at you every so often. “Jack?” You asked. He stopped and looked down at you. “What’s going to happen to me?” You asked your eyes filled with worry. Jack smiled and put his hand out for you to take. You took it and he lightly helped you up on your feet.
“Don’t worry (F/N) no harm will come to you. After all you are the pumpkin queen.”
Yes im getting better at updating! I finally got this whole Deviant art thing figured out! yay for me!

* Hmm? Queen? what is this? I guess you will find out soon enough! Hope you enjoy!
Part 5 >[link]

and just so there are no misunderstandings I do not own the nightmare before Christmas, or you, only the plot :)
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ChristineKapsalaki Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
O.O me..?The Pumkin Queen?
In my country there is no halloween but I wish we celebrated it too!!!And I would be the Queen!!!!
jmbaer13 Featured By Owner 6 days ago
Aw no Halloween? Where r u from?
ChristineKapsalaki Featured By Owner 6 days ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm from Greece.Sadly , we used to have Halloween but since the country got to have many people from other countries all got afraid and this tradition stopped.Since then we are only celebrating Carnival.Darn it.
jmbaer13 Featured By Owner 2 days ago
Aw that sucks
honeybadger-tron Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG Oh My Gawd Oh My Gawd Oh My Gawd Oh My Gawd Oh My Gawd Oh My Gawd Oh My Gawd Oh My Gawd Oh My Gawd Spaz attack Spaz attack Spaz attack Spaz attack Spaz attack Spaz attack Spaz attack Spaz attack Omg so cute Omg so cute Omg so cute Omg so cute Omg so cute Omg so cute Omg so cute Omg so cute + HO SHI- emoticon + 
honeybadger-tron Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
scweeeeeeee army
cookiehades Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014
Can't exactly do that cus I'm readin in the middle of the night, but that is exactly what I wanna do  XD
honeybadger-tron Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
YES lol
ocean499 Featured By Owner May 16, 2014
Pumpkin Queen....that sounds like something for my mom since she does love pumpkins.
MarioLuigiBellaBase Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Pumpkin Queen! Yay!
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