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Chapter 4
Jacks pov
Jack was completely confused. This beautiful girl was crying and hugging him for a reason definitely unknown to him. All he knew was that her name was (f/n). He just sat there letting you hold him and cry on him till you calmed down. You sighed before pulling back. Jack felt extremely cold for some reason and frowned as you pulled away.
“I’m sorry that was probably extremely awkward for you.” She laughed lightly. Jack smiled and shook his head.
“I’m Jack Skellington by the way. The Pumpkin King.” He said softly. You looked up at him wide eyed.
“So? What are you exactly? I mean not to be rude but I know you’re a skeleton, but how?” You asked slightly confused. Jack looked you up and down.
“Are you by any chance human?” He asked. You weren’t sure how to answer that. Of course you were! But what does that mean here? Would he kill you? Send you back? Jack seemed to get the answer he was looking for with your silence. Jack jumped up and moved from side to side as your eyes followed him. “How did you get here?” He quickly asked.
“Um there was this door with a pumpkin on it and a jumped in.” Jack stopped and walked up to you closer.
“You saw the doors?”
“Yes.”
“And you can see me now?”
“Yes.” There was a long pause of silence till jack broke it in a fit of …. Curiosity? He paced again and again mumbling and looking at you every so often. “Jack?” You asked. He stopped and looked down at you. “What’s going to happen to me?” You asked your eyes filled with worry. Jack smiled and put his hand out for you to take. You took it and he lightly helped you up on your feet.
“Don’t worry (F/N) no harm will come to you. After all you are the pumpkin queen.”
Yes im getting better at updating! I finally got this whole Deviant art thing figured out! yay for me!

* Hmm? Queen? what is this? I guess you will find out soon enough! Hope you enjoy!
Part 5 >[link]

and just so there are no misunderstandings I do not own the nightmare before Christmas, or you, only the plot :)
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Steven-Is-My-Babu Featured By Owner May 19, 2015  New Deviant
WH
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bluedragon1208 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2014
Ok.....that's pretty sudden!!! I show up from a door, just met Jack, and he calls me the pumpkin queen?!?! I would be freaking out in my head with a shocked expression. But so far the story is really good! ^-^
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jmbaer13 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2014
Thank you :)
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StarfallVulpixGirl Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
What? Wow. That was random and straight forward! XD
Like "Hey! I just met you and you're gonna be my Queen!"
Wow Jack. Just wow XD
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full-work Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2015  Student General Artist
i agree lmao
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StarfallVulpixGirl Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol yup
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8thDimention Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Come with us and you will see...
....this our town of...
Halloween
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ChristineKapsalaki Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
O.O me..?The Pumkin Queen?
In my country there is no halloween but I wish we celebrated it too!!!And I would be the Queen!!!!
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jmbaer13 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014
Aw no Halloween? Where r u from?
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ChristineKapsalaki Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm from Greece.Sadly , we used to have Halloween but since the country got to have many people from other countries all got afraid and this tradition stopped.Since then we are only celebrating Carnival.Darn it.
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jmbaer13 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014
Aw that sucks
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honeybadger-tron Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG Oh My Gawd Oh My Gawd Oh My Gawd Oh My Gawd Oh My Gawd Oh My Gawd Oh My Gawd Oh My Gawd Oh My Gawd Spaz attack Spaz attack Spaz attack Spaz attack Spaz attack Spaz attack Spaz attack Spaz attack Omg so cute Omg so cute Omg so cute Omg so cute Omg so cute Omg so cute Omg so cute Omg so cute + HO SHI- emoticon + 
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honeybadger-tron Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
scweeeeeeee army
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cookiehades Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014
Can't exactly do that cus I'm readin in the middle of the night, but that is exactly what I wanna do  XD
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honeybadger-tron Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
YES lol
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oXocean-666Xo Featured By Owner May 16, 2014
Pumpkin Queen....that sounds like something for my mom since she does love pumpkins.
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MarioLuigiBellaBase Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Pumpkin Queen! Yay!
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blue730 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014
Pumpkin Queen...YAY!!!! :squee: :squee: :squee: :squee: :happybounce: :happybounce: :happybounce: :happybounce: 
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haleyboplucy Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
dont know why it says 'font font' like this --> <font><font>
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haleyboplucy Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
<font><font>HONESTLY I'M NOT GONNA LIE TO YOU, BUT I SCREAMED A GIRLY SCREAM WHEN I READ THAT I'M THE PUMPKIN QUEEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IM SO GLAD MY BROTHER LEFT FOR WORK AND MY YOUNGEST BROTHER AND MY MOM  ARE GONE IN NEW JERSEY FOR THE WEEKEND!!!!!!!!!! I HAD A DREAM THAT I WAS ONCE AND I SWEAR I WAS SO DISAPPOINTED WHEN IT ENDED. YAY MY DREAMS ARE COMING TRUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...............ISH, TRUE-ISH..... BUT STILL YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!</font></font>
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jmbaer13 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014
Lol glad I made ya fangirl!
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JadetheKidR9 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014   General Artist
May I be fangirling over a skeleton guy for the first time? -fangirl comes out of ears- HELLZ YEA I AM!!!! 
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jmbaer13 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014
ya! lol
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jean17540 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014
Holy shiz i might fangirl for the first time......
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jmbaer13 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014
0o0 well im glad it was my story then~ Congrades!
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jackfrostlover4462 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
YEAH QUEEN WOOOOOOOOOOOOHOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!
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Hetaliancp23 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I wuv dis series :3 I just got done watching the movie. My dad got really annoyed though since I was doing every line in the voices :P Likabaus xD
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jmbaer13 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013
lol I do that too! but it gets to the point where I annoy myself :/ and then realize what a nerd I am...... but I love being a nerd! if I wasn't I wouldn't be doing this awesome shit right now!
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Hetaliancp23 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Tru dat, I think we'd be AWESOME friends! Like, more awesome than Gilbert himself :D
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jmbaer13 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013
0-0 (over loading on awesomeness)
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Hetaliancp23 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Do you watch Hetalia? It's liek meh fave show xD
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jmbaer13 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013
yes! loooove iiiit!
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Hetaliancp23 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You know what..... WE. ARE. FRIENDS!!!!!!!!!!  *tackle hugs you*
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jmbaer13 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013
*tackle hugs ya back* yus! A Friend!
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blackveiledbrody123 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's ok, dude. I mean dudette. I hang out with my sisters tooooo much.
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jmbaer13 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013
XD well I give you bro hug anyway! brohugplz
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blackveiledbrody123 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank chu. Ur pretty. U single? If not, it was woth a try.
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jmbaer13 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013
Lol yup dry him but thanks for the offer :)
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jmbaer13 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013
*sry
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jmbaer13 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013
*hun Gosh! Stupid spell check xD
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blackveiledbrody123 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Heh,
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blackveiledbrody123 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yay! Man, I need guy friends....:(
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jmbaer13 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013
I can pretend to be a guy friend! but that probably wont help your problem. lol
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